Living far away from home improves their ability in money managing, since their parents may not support their financial.
First of all, congratulations to this student for use of the word ‘since’. Perhaps she read my previous post dealing with because, since and as?
Unfortunately the use of ‘financial’ here lacks coherence because the Indonesian version of ‘financial’ – finansial – is used informally as a noun, whereas in English it is always an adjective. The reader is left wondering.. financial what?
The following alternatives use different word forms and also include strong collocation:
- ..their parents may not cover their financial commitments. (adjective affects and collocates with commitments)
- ..their parents may not support them financially. (adverb affects and collocates with support)
- ..their parents may not cover their finances. (noun collocates with cover)
The only other example I can think of in which an imported adjective is used as a noun, might be:
- Taking drugs is not good for your mental.
..which should read:
- Taking drugs is not good for your mental health.
If you can think of any other words that get lost in translation in the same way, please comment below this post!
Spoiler alert! If you want to test your ability to use these words, try the gap fill challenge first!
In my previous post I challenged you to complete a text using the words success, failure, effort, and belief. In this post I give the completed text plus some advice about common collocations used in the text.
1. If you tried the challenge, read the text and check your answers.
Bill is a successful olympic runner. He has won several gold medals and has achieved success in many other competitions. Ever since he was a child, he has always been a success. Last year he successfully broke several world records. What does he think are the factors influencing his success? Clean living, plenty of training, and of course the desire to succeed!
Budi is unsuccessful as a runner. He fails every time he enters a race. Ever since he began running he has been a failure. As a child he failed. As a teenager he failed, and now as a middle age man he continues to fail. He believes his constant failure to win may be related to his fondness for nightclubs and the fact that he eats nothing but bakso.
It seems that in order to succeed, a runner needs to make an effort to maintain the correct lifestyle and to maintain a belief in winning. It is only when we believe we will win that we can avoid failure and achieve success.
2. Notice the underlined collocations!
- achieve success (without ‘a’)
- be a success (with ‘a’)
- be a failure (with ‘a’)
- make an effort to + V1
- failure to win (failure uncountable)
- a belief in + n
I searched in my favourite online collocation dictionary OZDIC and found some other collocations for success, failure, effort, and belief. Try searching for other forms of these words and look at different collocates.
3. Talk about it! (IELTS Speaking Part 2)
With a friend, share successful and less successful experiences. Talk about how much effort you made in order to achieve a goal. Are you ‘a success’? How do you know?
4. Write about it! (IELTS Writing Task 2)
- What are the factors that cause success or failure?
- Does failure mean that the desire to succeed wasn’t strong enough?
- What are some different ways to measure success and failure? What is the best way? Why?
Post your writing in the comments box below and I will give feedback.