A many-headed doctor?!

Posted by pakguru on November 22nd, 2016 | 0 comments | grammar, IELTS, menjadi, singular plural, speaking, writing

I am a doctor. My first sister is a doctor. My second sister is a doctor. And my third sister is a doctor. My father wanted us to become a doctor.

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• I am a doctor. My first sister is a doctor. My second sister is a doctor. And my third sister is a doctor. My father wanted us to become doctors.