Posted by pakguru on April 1st, 2018 | 0 comments | EAP, IELTS, signals, vocabulary, writing.speaking, yang
The arts perhaps bring balance and harmony which the arts are not just what you see but what you make others see.
This is potentially sophisticated. You need:
OK, so what’s happening here? Well we have..
independent clause | in which | independent clause |
The arts perhaps bring balance and harmony | in which | the arts are not just what you see but what you make others see. |
But notice that the second independent clause describes the thing mentioned in the rheme of the first independent clause (balance and harmony).
Actually you can also use according to which:
Hmm OK so let me see if I can create my own example following the same 3 elements. (Just let me roll up my sleeves. Ahem.) OK here goes..
OK. Now your turn! Comments below this post, please!
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